Michael shows no real emotion in the haiku. The repeating line could be seen as an attempt to solidify the feeling of heat, by showing it is so hot, that he cannot even get the energy to think of five more syllables. Personally, I think it just shows laziness of the Haiku art.
I think he should have went for:
It's too fucking hot Living in a hot, wet sponge God damn it's too hot
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Yeah it's too hot.
Date: 2003-07-17 01:50 pm (UTC)I think you should go to the hospital for that...
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Date: 2003-07-17 02:23 pm (UTC)I think he should have went for:
It's too fucking hot
Living in a hot, wet sponge
God damn it's too hot
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Date: 2003-07-17 03:16 pm (UTC)Personal favorite repetitive haiku (courtesy Kevin Lenzo):
Damian Conway
Goddam, Damian Conway
Damian Conway
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Date: 2003-07-17 03:43 pm (UTC)SpongeBob SquarePants!
Absorbent and yellow and pourous is he!
SpongeBob SquarePants!
If nautical nonsense be something you wish!
SpongeBob SquarePants!
Then drop on the deck and flop like a fish!
SpongeBob SquarePants!
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Date: 2003-07-17 03:43 pm (UTC)I wholeheartedly concur
Like a split-pea soup.
A.
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Date: 2003-07-17 04:33 pm (UTC)